Angel Destler App

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Angel Destler application

Original
Character Image Gemma Arterton

Name: Angel Destler
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Species: Half demon
Planet of Origin: Earth
Occupation: Hunter, second luitenant in the United States Marines

Physical Description: Five foot seven, long dark hair, carries a sword on her back and a pistol on her left hip.
Personality: Angel doesnt take shit from ANYONE, human or alien. She is a feirce fighter and is loyal, VERY LOYAL. She would lay her own life down for her friends without a second thought.
History: Angel was found as an infant and was placed in foster care. She jumped around from home to home until she was old enough to leave the system, at Eighteen. She joined the Marines soon after and has seen two battles overseas.
Addition Medical Information:
RP Sample: Gunshots. Explosions. That is what haunted Angel's dreams every night. She dreaded going to sleep, because she knew she would be transported back to the battlefield.

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Pending

While I think this is a lovely start, you seem to be missing Medical Information and.. her history is a bit lacking.. If you could take the time to revise this and then let a mod know, we will look back over your app~

Thank you~

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Oct 29, 2013 21:24:35 GMT -5 @angeldestler said:

Angel Destler application

Original
Character Image Gemma Arterton

Name: Angel Destler
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Species: Half demon
Planet of Origin: Earth
Occupation: Hunter, second luitenant in the United States Marines

Physical Description: Five foot seven, long dark hair, carries a sword on her back and a pistol on her left hip.
Personality: Angel doesnt take shit from ANYONE, human or alien. She is a feirce fighter and is loyal, VERY LOYAL. She would lay her own life down for her friends without a second thought.
History: Angel was found as an infant and was placed in foster care. She jumped around from home to home until she was old enough to leave the system, at Eighteen. She joined the Marines soon after and has seen two battles overseas. She can slightly read circular gallifreyian. 
Addition Medical Information: N/A
RP Sample: A lone figure sat crouched on the top of large building, watching the people on the street below. The duster she wore was a long coat, the edges flapping in the light breeze. She wore a pair of dark jeans, a pair of black boots and a royal blue long sleeve shirt. Her eyes were emerald green, her long hair laid against her back as the breeze slowly blew through her. She looked up, hearing thunder, smelling rain in the air. She slowly stood, her duster rattling gently. 

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Accepted!

Now what?